Saturday, August 9, 2014

The Accident

This is writing activity helps the student to sequence their writing. The comic strip is used as a motivation to write his/story…  This is Sienna's interpretation of the pictures
In the morning everyone was shopping for Christmas in the City. I went shopping with my friend . I got some chocolates for my mum because she likes the so much. Chocolate is her favourite treat.



The old man walked in front of a flash car on a noisy road. 



When the car saw the old man everyone shouted run!  But he couldn't hear them . The car screeched to a stop!

We are tomorrow finishing off our writing, so stay tuned for our final caption…...


1 comment:

  1. Sienna Wow, you have told an interesting story in a logical order.

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